THE CALLING OF HALF SKY
(Written For TOI WRITE INDIA)
© Anupam Jaiswal
Close to the city
of Paithan, in a small village called Sauviragram, which lay along the banks of
the great river Godavari, lived a woman named Ilaa. Being cotton farmers, her
family was well to do, but not among the richest in their area. It was the
harvest season, and cotton had to be picked from the plants. The wholesalers
and traders from Paithan would be arriving in just a few weeks, carrying gold
and goods for barter. They would exchange what they carried for the cotton that
the farmers grew. The bales of cotton had to be ready in time! Work was at its
peak!
But Ilaa was not to be found in the fields. She wasn't working. Instead, she was sitting by the banks of the great river Godavari.
'I am sick of this!' she grunted loudly. ‘This is not the purpose for which I am here; I have to find the purpose of my life.’
But Ilaa was not to be found in the fields. She wasn't working. Instead, she was sitting by the banks of the great river Godavari.
'I am sick of this!' she grunted loudly. ‘This is not the purpose for which I am here; I have to find the purpose of my life.’
She started throwing stones in the
river, though she looked conscious, but she was not actually. She was so busy
with her thinking that she could not sense the herd of bullock carts
surrounding her.
The first caravan of traders from
Paithan was about to enter Sauviragram.
The sound of ringing bells, coming
from the bullock-carts, Interrupted her thoughts & she looked around, she
saw that a big caravan of traders are coming,
and a person was signaling them to stop. The caravan stopped there, that person
was saying to them that they will rest there at the banks of river Godavari. She
budged into the bushes, to look who they actually were.
The bumper crop of the cotton this
year could easily be guessed, seeing the large number of traders of Paithan
coming towards Sauviragram.
Though she was not on the fields but
guessed, definitely, this time her father will get rid of his debts, and would
be collecting enough gold for her sister’s re- marriage. She had an elder
sister Idaa, who was a widow.
She never saw that big caravan, so she
stayed there.
Traders were carrying with them, all
they could bring to barter to get the maximum cotton, but they were not in
hurry. She noticed that, there were some women & children also in the
caravan.
She saw an old but a very graceful
lady coming out of a bullock cart, she was somewhere in her fifties, but her face
was glittering. Some person from the caravan indulged into some sort of preparation,
some went to the river to catch fish, some went to the jungle to arrange woods,
and some indulged into preparation of food.
She decided to stay there a bit
longer, she was interested in knowing their culture, she was keen to know more
about them and observing was the best mode at that moment. She crept near their
tents.
Some of them were resting, some of
them preparing food, children were playing there. After some time, food was
prepared and all were instructed to join for lunch. She noticed, they all
started sitting in row, a dais was placed in front of the rows, for the head of
the caravan.
Almost all were sitting, but the dais for
the head of the caravan was not occupied, yet.
She was curious to know, who lead that
caravan.
Suddenly Ilaa saw something strange,
that she could not believe. She saw that lady with
the glittering face, reaching the dais & standing up there with a water pot
in her hands. She started sprinkling water with some tree leaves on
the persons sitting over there and chanting some shlokas. Ilaa could not hear
clearly but, one thing clearly understood, that woman holds a very respectable
place in that caravan of traders of Paithan.
After
completing the ritual, the woman sat on the dais maintained for the head of the
caravan & started the lunch proceedings, followed by the other members of
that group.
She left that place & headed
towards Sauviragram territory. She was thinking that, ‘why those traders came
so early? As per the crop prospects, they had to come after a week or two.’
And who was that woman, who led the
group of men?
She reached Sauviragram by the evening
but told nothing to anybody except this fact that traders are coming.
She went to meet Idaa. Idaa looked
tired after working whole day in the fields, picking cotton from the plants;
she was sitting there on a rock.
Ilaa reached her and narrated the
whole story.
Idaa’s husband was a priest, and she learned
a lot from him. She learned some rituals, studied Veda under his supervision.
He used to believe that woman’s position was very much deplorable that time, he
taught her the position of woman in Vedic age; he used to say that the position
of woman shall be restored to the Vedic age where every woman gets respected
and was treated equivalent to men.
So he gave respect to Idaa, but Idaa
enjoyed that position & respect while he was living. And she was compelled
to leave her husband’s house in just one month of his death and came back to
her father’s house, where she was given a room, at the backyard of the house.
She had to work hard in the fields to earn the livelihood for her daughter
& herself.
It’s amazing to know
that a woman leading a group of traders which is dominated by male members. She
must be belonging to the richest, Idaa said.
They
both were discussing this whole night and slept.
Ilaa
was a kind of woman, who, like many others, was unhappy with the condition of
the woman in the society. Moreover, she didn’t like the way the woman was
treated in the society.
The
woman had a very subordinate role to the men, the woman supposed to obey the
directions and order given by their husbands. They have nothing to do with the
education.
The
custom of Sati, prohibition of widow marriage, bigamy, polygamy were prevailing
in the society, even divorce was in practice.
Ilaa
grew up, listening the stories of the woman in the Vedic age, but in realty
found nothing in her age. She wants to restore the grace of the woman again.
She was very mush impressed with the ideology of Chatrapati Shivaji. Ilaa &
Idaa both used to teach the girls & boys of the Sauviragram all they learned.
But it was a secret among participants only.
Ilaa
was very much impressed with the woman, she saw at the banks of the river
Godavari.
Next
morning rays of sun brought the traders of Paithan inside the Sauviragram with
them.
Everybody
was aware that traders have come, Ilaa & Idaa were very keen to meet that woman
and looking for her in the group.
Traders
were given a place in the Sauviragram, to fix their tent and establish their
temporary accommodation, very next to the place allotted to balutedars, who
already have reached Sauviragram, to get their
return for the tools, equipments & assistance provided for the agriculture
operations to the farmers.
Patil
of Sauviragram reached there to welcome the traders and invited them to have
lunch with him.
After
lunch, Matrimaya, the head of the traders, apologized to Patil for not
informing him about their early visit. She told that as it’s war time and
traders safety is always at risk, as they can be looted any time in journey, So
we decided not to travel to Sauviragram on the pre-scheduled time to keep our
traders safe from attacks. She requested Patil to take her to the fields to see
the crop.
Patil
accepted her request and made arrangement for the same. Matrimaya told him that,
yesterday she saw a girl there at the banks of the Godavari; she wished to go
to the field with her.
Ilaa
went to them and soon they left for the fields.
Patil
arranged horses, but Matrimaya preferred to go through bullock cart.
So
both Matrimaya & Ilaa sat into the bullock cart and left for the field.
I
saw you when you were hiding behind the bushes, said Matrimaya.
‘Oh!
I thought nobody saw me; I stayed there to know more about you people &
your culture.’
‘I
am amazed by seeing that you lead the group of men? How it’s possible? By which
name I can call you? My sister Idaa is a widow and she had to leave her husband’s
place within a month of his death, and I came to know that you are also a
widow.’
‘When
I saw you, I thought that I have reached in to the Vedic age.’ Women were
respected and treated equally to the men in all spheres of life.
“Since
my child hood I have seen the misery been suffered by woman in the society, it
seems that their freedom is not possible now.”
“Both,
my sister & I started teaching secretly at
nights to the next generation of our village. I have learned from my sister
Idaa, I started telling them that their liberty is in their own hand, I teach
them about shivaji’s Philosophy.”
“Shivaji”,
said Matrimaya, “yes he was the real hero, my father was in his troop, he was
among one of his strategist. My Father used to make strategies for him.” I saw
him once, I was in my childhood, he visited Paithan in 1679 with my father, and
he was on the way to Jalna.
“Oh!
Great.”
“You
can call me Aai, my people call me by this name.”
“You
are right, liberty of women is in the hands of woman only, they will have to
understand
it, they will have to acquire all the skills which a man acquires, all the
skills and have to lift the veil, act confident, work in co-ordination with the
half of the society.”
“They
have to show that they are not the slaves of men. They have their intellect
too.”
‘When
my husband died, I immediately took the charge of his estate & business, in
his life time he taught me all the skills & business acumen.’
‘I
used to sit with him in the meetings with the traders & businessmen. He
always asked for my advice & appreciated my views. This gave me a lot of confidence
and I succeeded & administered all his estate.’
“Nobody opposed you Aai? After all it’s a male
dominated society.”
“Yes voice raised but had to be mum, because nobody had
the skills as I had acquired about the business & trades, so no other could
give any better option to run the estate as I had.”
“Oh! Aai, how did you manage all this?”
‘You also can Ilaa’. The only thing you have to do is
that you will have to believe & take your actions forward. Work for your
sisters, mothers who have been deprived of their basic rights from centuries.
They need someone to help them; they need someone who can restore their
glorious past of ancient Vedic age. I believe Ilaa, you can do this.
Take
it as a mission & dedicate your life to this mission only.
Ilaa
listened to her but said nothing. In the meanwhile, they reached the fields.
Bales
of cotton looked like clouds on the earth. It seemed that the women had reached
the mountains covered with snow.
Matrimaya
inspected the whole area and thanked God for that bumper crop of cotton which
she saw and found the crop exactly as described by her husband. “I am here for
the first time” she said, “My husband used to say “I will take you along-with
me to the cotton fields in Sauviragram. You will see that the fields are covered
with the snow”. Now I can clearly see what he wanted to show me. Unfortunately
he is not here with me.”
They
both returned to the Village.
The
traders stayed there for a week and completed the transaction. Ilaa’s father
got enough gold this time and the traders got their cotton.
Bullock
carts were loaded with the bales of cotton and the Caravan left Sauviragram; the
evening was dusky red.
Ilaa
couldn’t sleep that night; she was thinking of the words of Matrimaya.
Matrimaya
casted an impact on her conscience, her words fired up Ilaa’s thoughts. Ilaa knew
that she will have to go far with the activities she was carrying secretly and she
clearly sensed that Matrimaya casted an impression on other villagers as well.
She
noticed that the whole village was talking about Matrimaya.
She
got up, and went to her father.
“Father
I am not able to sleep today.”
“Oh!
Come Ilaa, what happened? Is everything all right?” asked her father.
“Yes
father”, Ilaa replied.
“Father
I have to say something to you. Due to the blessings of goddess, we have got a
bagful of gold and other goods we needed. We have got best we could have bartered
in exchange of our cotton. But father, I want to say that please free Idaa
& me. You have got enough gold, so please use that to free our land first.
Idaa doesn’t want to marry again. Idaa and I decided to dedicate our lives educating
others in the village and beyond.
Father you know that a woman’s position in our
society is lowly, they are kept separated from education which is their basic
right. They have been facing discrimination by this male dominates society. So
we want to help them stand on their own feet and secure a respectable position
in the society.
We
want our ancient glory back. You must have noticed that a woman like Matrimaya
has single handedly established that it’s quite possible; what we just need is
education and self dependence. I know the villagers are talking about her. They
are really inspired by her and are appreciating her achievement.
I
believe they will support our mission. The only thing left is your permission.
That
moment, Idaa, who was standing outside, entered the room and said to her
father, “Father please remember mother’s last word, what she said to you before
dying” Idaa said.
“Father
we have found the purpose of our life and are now waiting for your permission.”
He
kept sitting for a sometime and spoke nothing. Then he stood up and came to his
daughters.
I am
proud of you and my blessings will always be with you in this great endeavor of
providing the women a bright future, a new dawn, a new life.
The
half sky is calling..
Written by Anupam Jaiswal
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(y) superbbbb sir!!! read the story... Much appreciated... (Y) I think it's for that TOI initiative of writing with Preeti Shenoy... Wish you all the best!!! loved the lines
ReplyDelete"providing the women a bright future, a new dawn, a new life.
The half sky is calling.." and beautiful narration!!
Yes! it was for Amish Tripathi's plot.
DeleteThanks! for liking the Story.
ok! Great! It's inspirational!
DeleteThnx Neetu Arora
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